Wednesday, June 20, 2018
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Kia ora, I am kathleen walker from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you made your pepeha on your blog and the way you coloured in part of the mountain and ocean and made the words stand out it looks really apeeling.
I learnt that you are the oldest child in your family and that you are looking forward to action week this year, i am too!
Maybe you could try more of that editing/ art you did with your pepeha and face art because it looks amazing and if you keep doing then i think you could get really good!